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#29899 - 01/21/07 06:55 PM Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
PoisonArrowShatteredHeart Offline
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Registered: 12/30/06
Posts: 266
I absouloutly cannot think of a title for this but it has bin running around in my head for a while, so I'd like to see what you guys can come up with.

Running
Screaming
Tearing away
I can't seem to get on track

I know what I want
And I know what I feel
I know how to proceed
But not how to start

I strayed away
I left the path
I wanted my freedom
I got this instead

I can get on track
But I need a start
I want some one beside
For the rest of eternity

I can't seem to find him
Or he can't find me
My heart is so fragile
But I've been ready to take a chance

The ones I want
Are all tied up
And I know what you'll say
If it ain't meant to be
It won't happen

But I'm starting to get lonely
My friends can't help me here
I need him beside me
Even if I haven't found him yet
_________________________
So what if you can see the darkest side of me. I display it openly. And if you don't like it, well **wondering if I should care, still wondering, hmmmmm NOPE!!!**

Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha


:bang: laugh :innocent: :think: confused eek :jot: mad :rolleyes: :p
Sincerly and heartfully meant,
The girl who knows everything and nothing at all
The girl who knows lost love
The girl who only feels the rain
Erica Reid

Oh BTW HANG ON SLOOPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#29900 - 01/22/07 10:03 AM Re: Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
StillaDreamer Offline
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Registered: 10/03/06
Posts: 978
Eluded by Love?

Im horrible with titles!!!!!!!!! But I can feel the yearning thru your words...one so many of us share! Great write!

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#29901 - 01/22/07 07:01 PM Re: Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
PoetryAngel Offline
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Registered: 11/12/05
Posts: 924
Freedom vs. Love

I don't know, but great poem Erky.

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All's fair in love and war.

[color:Magenta]If this is love, I'd hate to see war.
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Death comes for everyone.
Be glad that I'm merciful.


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#29902 - 01/25/07 03:12 PM Re: Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
PoisonArrowShatteredHeart Offline
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Registered: 12/30/06
Posts: 266
Thx Stilladreamer and Danielle.
_________________________
So what if you can see the darkest side of me. I display it openly. And if you don't like it, well **wondering if I should care, still wondering, hmmmmm NOPE!!!**

Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha


:bang: laugh :innocent: :think: confused eek :jot: mad :rolleyes: :p
Sincerly and heartfully meant,
The girl who knows everything and nothing at all
The girl who knows lost love
The girl who only feels the rain
Erica Reid

Oh BTW HANG ON SLOOPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#29903 - 02/04/07 01:38 PM Re: Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
Plethora Rose Offline
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Registered: 01/31/07
Posts: 202
How about "A Fork in Freedom Road"? I'm not the best with titles, either, but thought I'd give it a shot.
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Set me as a seal upon thine heart, as a seal upon thine arm; for love is strong as death.
Song of Solomon 8:6
Don't let me get too deep.

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#29904 - 05/18/07 09:20 AM Re: Needs a title, brain cells not working. Help, please.
PoisonArrowShatteredHeart Offline
Senior Member

Registered: 12/30/06
Posts: 266
Thx
_________________________
So what if you can see the darkest side of me. I display it openly. And if you don't like it, well **wondering if I should care, still wondering, hmmmmm NOPE!!!**

Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha


:bang: laugh :innocent: :think: confused eek :jot: mad :rolleyes: :p
Sincerly and heartfully meant,
The girl who knows everything and nothing at all
The girl who knows lost love
The girl who only feels the rain
Erica Reid

Oh BTW HANG ON SLOOPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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